Not Bad...it kept my attention and I liked it...good job professor!
I think was definitely a good story! I thought Jonah as the shopkeeper was superb, as well as Uncle as Lenny; he was perfect for the part. He made me forget I had written some of those lines!5/5 stars.
Not Bad...it kept my attention and I liked it...good job professor!
ReplyDeleteI think was definitely a good story! I thought Jonah as the shopkeeper was superb, as well as Uncle as Lenny; he was perfect for the part. He made me forget I had written some of those lines!
ReplyDelete5/5 stars.