Great! That was an interesting story; I mean it didn't have lots of action or anything, but all the discussion was very good. I laughed at the scene where Zack is going near the edge of the cliff and his dad tells him to stop scaring that poor woman! lol :D And there were some other good humorous parts. And the sound effects during the storm were nice and gave a good atmosphere. The only thing that really stuck out in a bad way though was when the crowd would go "WOW!" or something like that, it didn't seem very real. Canned crowd sounds are usually hard to incorporate into a story [believe me, I know :( ].
Anyway, I would give this a 4 out of 5 stars! Definitely a fantastic job on it! And I'm looking forward to the next book! (hint, hint)
Ya I have been doing a bit more adapting on the second one. But hopefully we can get Professor Hasenpfeffer finished soon. And then Professional Reunion. Boy productions life is busy!
Great! That was an interesting story; I mean it didn't have lots of action or anything, but all the discussion was very good. I laughed at the scene where Zack is going near the edge of the cliff and his dad tells him to stop scaring that poor woman! lol :D And there were some other good humorous parts. And the sound effects during the storm were nice and gave a good atmosphere. The only thing that really stuck out in a bad way though was when the crowd would go "WOW!" or something like that, it didn't seem very real. Canned crowd sounds are usually hard to incorporate into a story [believe me, I know :( ].
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I would give this a 4 out of 5 stars! Definitely a fantastic job on it! And I'm looking forward to the next book! (hint, hint)
J. B.
Ya I have been doing a bit more adapting on the second one. But hopefully we can get Professor Hasenpfeffer finished soon. And then Professional Reunion. Boy productions life is busy!
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