Great! That was an interesting story; I mean it didn't have lots of action or anything, but all the discussion was very good. I laughed at the scene where Zack is going near the edge of the cliff and his dad tells him to stop scaring that poor woman! lol :D And there were some other good humorous parts. And the sound effects during the storm were nice and gave a good atmosphere. The only thing that really stuck out in a bad way though was when the crowd would go "WOW!" or something like that, it didn't seem very real. Canned crowd sounds are usually hard to incorporate into a story [believe me, I know :( ]. Anyway, I would give this a 4 out of 5 stars! Definitely a fantastic job on it! And I'm looking forward to the next book! (hint, hint)J. B.
Ya I have been doing a bit more adapting on the second one. But hopefully we can get Professor Hasenpfeffer finished soon. And then Professional Reunion. Boy productions life is busy!